i wish…..

when things go wrong..

when heart refuses to go on the roads of my mind…..

when my eyes helps my pain to flow….

and when my body holds the shattered peices within…..

i plead…..be there wid mee….

dont speak and just stay near mee…

dont move and just stare at mee..

when the mistake is mine

when hurting a heart which control the heart beats of my soul

when the situation though so clear seems to be

as dark as things i have done

i wish …..u to be there with mee….

don answer but please keep the questions in front of me that haunts your mind

don touch but feel the warmth of my love and care i store

when words are not sufficient to explain

when the dawn breaks the door of darkness in my life

when smile becomes a memory and wetness in eyes becomes a part in of my life

i pray…..you to be the happiest person on the earth

i wish for ur lips a forever smile….

i wish for a funfilled vicinity

when thoughts take over my mind

when the numbness of my breathe becomes the life of my soul

when my footsteps become random and out of the safe road…

i wish ….to be there in your mind..

dont love but hate me with the sincere heart..

dont share but just tell me why you are hurt…

the only thing in our lives that will remain same

the sense of toghternesss with the lonileness

no one else to fill the the vacant space we left in each others life!!!!

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19 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Rohan kgn-kgp
    Apr 16, 2010 @ 18:48:48

    good1 yaar..nice feelings…samajh me zara kam aai par jitni aai maza aaya

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  2. Snigdha
    Apr 16, 2010 @ 19:22:47

    As always……machau blog hai ladkee……good going……

    *though i did not have the patience to read your entire poem…….still…..its good….:)

    Reply

  3. Charu
    Apr 16, 2010 @ 20:27:49

    Beautiful poem. girl- straight from the heart! <3 <3

    Reply

  4. surabhi007
    Apr 17, 2010 @ 04:19:45

    @all…. thanx!! :)

    Reply

  5. Apoorv Jain
    Apr 17, 2010 @ 09:31:47

    Straight from heart.. ye to pata chal gaya… samajh bhi aa gyi ache se..
    Now its time to disclose wo larka hai kon.. itna lucky ki uske liye poem likhi ja rahi hai!! hmm..bolo bolo..tell tell

    Reply

  6. surabhi
    Apr 17, 2010 @ 12:55:30

    @apoorv….ahem ahem!!!

    Reply

  7. janmejay
    Apr 17, 2010 @ 14:14:25

    rhymeless treat for everyone….

    Reply

  8. Kanika Khanna
    Apr 17, 2010 @ 14:56:21

    Beautiful words and lines…seriously loved it!

    Reply

  9. shachi mittal
    Apr 17, 2010 @ 17:25:11

    yaar surabhi macha di! loved it yaar!sach main badhi hi strong and senti feeings hain tumhari!!maza aa gaya yaar padh kar!ab to hum aapke fan ho gaye hain!!

    Reply

  10. Keshav
    Apr 17, 2010 @ 19:28:42

    nyce………. :)

    Reply

  11. snehilbasoya
    Apr 18, 2010 @ 18:32:23

    could have been much better ………. more clear, need not be rhymic, yet thoughts seemed to be wringled up in an awkward situation. Gave an impression of my own confusing blogs :P

    But still, nice one, not that bad :)

    Snehil

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  12. snehilbasoya
    Apr 18, 2010 @ 18:33:00

    tum mujhe ladka batao ……………. main tumhe ladki bataunga !!!!!!!!!!

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  13. surabhi
    Apr 19, 2010 @ 06:57:19

    @snehil ……
    hmmm…..may be i knew wat m writing ……i ignored d vague impression it wud giv on a reader…..

    thanx!!!

    n for ladka ladki k naam…….done!!! phele aap bataoge!!! blog per hi!!!
    waiting for ur comment anticipating;ly…tin tin tedin!!

    Reply

  14. Snehil
    Apr 20, 2010 @ 18:13:49

    yahan to nahi, insti mein bata dunga :P

    Reply

  15. Nishant Jaiswal
    May 26, 2010 @ 07:58:46

    sorry 4 late!!!
    aftrall, JAB JAAGO TABHI SAVERA!!!

    hmmmm……always machau blog , no doubt.
    areee kabhi apna dil apne paas b rakha kar…humesha blogspot pe daaal deti hai!!!!!!!(kiddo)

    I got 2 things frm dis blog, firstly u r in smthng smthng(xactly dont know) missing sum1 like hell. secondly, u r sad too.

    both contradicts……..will u correct me.

    Reply

  16. manoj
    May 28, 2010 @ 09:43:51

    cool yaar acha likha hai
    pehle se likhti ho ya iit me ane ke bad start kiya hai?
    its really nice.

    Reply

  17. vivek sinha
    May 29, 2010 @ 15:09:20

    labo ki muskurahtein bni hai atit
    jane kyo tum jo ruth gaye
    ye jindagi hme murda si hoti hai pratit
    dekho ab to anshu bhi hmare sukh gaye

    chahe mat karo pyar mujhse
    par ek sacchi nafarat hi kaar lo
    chahae n baanto sab gum mujhse
    kyo ho itne gamjada,ye gila to kar dur lo

    Reply

  18. surabhi yadav
    Jun 15, 2010 @ 08:58:05

    @snehil…
    glad to know about ur numerous crushes…: :P : P
    all the best !
    @nishant…
    there’s nothing grave going in my lyf …don worry… its jus that the poem is a bit serious,…!! m fyn! :)
    @manoj…
    thanx..
    phele se hi likhti thi,….iit mein aakar blogging shuru ki hai
    @vivek…
    it really feels great to read my lines in ur words….thanx yaar!!! n u write awesome!!!

    Reply

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