i wish…..
16 Apr 2010 19 Comments
when heart refuses to go on the roads of my mind…..
when my eyes helps my pain to flow….
and when my body holds the shattered peices within…..
i plead…..be there wid mee….
dont speak and just stay near mee…
dont move and just stare at mee..
when the mistake is mine
when hurting a heart which control the heart beats of my soul
when the situation though so clear seems to be
as dark as things i have done
i wish …..u to be there with mee….
don answer but please keep the questions in front of me that haunts your mind
don touch but feel the warmth of my love and care i store
when words are not sufficient to explain
when the dawn breaks the door of darkness in my life
when smile becomes a memory and wetness in eyes becomes a part in of my life
i pray…..you to be the happiest person on the earth
i wish for ur lips a forever smile….
i wish for a funfilled vicinity
when thoughts take over my mind
when the numbness of my breathe becomes the life of my soul
when my footsteps become random and out of the safe road…
i wish ….to be there in your mind..
dont love but hate me with the sincere heart..
dont share but just tell me why you are hurt…
the only thing in our lives that will remain same
the sense of toghternesss with the lonileness
no one else to fill the the vacant space we left in each others life!!!!

Apr 16, 2010 @ 18:48:48
good1 yaar..nice feelings…samajh me zara kam aai par jitni aai maza aaya
Apr 16, 2010 @ 19:22:47
As always……machau blog hai ladkee……good going……
*though i did not have the patience to read your entire poem…….still…..its good….:)
Apr 16, 2010 @ 20:27:49
Beautiful poem. girl- straight from the heart! <3 <3
Apr 17, 2010 @ 04:19:45
@all…. thanx!!
Apr 17, 2010 @ 09:31:47
Straight from heart.. ye to pata chal gaya… samajh bhi aa gyi ache se..
Now its time to disclose wo larka hai kon.. itna lucky ki uske liye poem likhi ja rahi hai!! hmm..bolo bolo..tell tell
Apr 17, 2010 @ 12:55:30
@apoorv….ahem ahem!!!
Apr 17, 2010 @ 14:14:25
rhymeless treat for everyone….
Apr 17, 2010 @ 14:56:21
Beautiful words and lines…seriously loved it!
Apr 17, 2010 @ 17:25:11
yaar surabhi macha di! loved it yaar!sach main badhi hi strong and senti feeings hain tumhari!!maza aa gaya yaar padh kar!ab to hum aapke fan ho gaye hain!!
Apr 17, 2010 @ 19:28:42
nyce……….
Apr 18, 2010 @ 18:32:23
could have been much better ………. more clear, need not be rhymic, yet thoughts seemed to be wringled up in an awkward situation. Gave an impression of my own confusing blogs
But still, nice one, not that bad
Snehil
Apr 18, 2010 @ 18:33:00
tum mujhe ladka batao ……………. main tumhe ladki bataunga !!!!!!!!!!
Apr 19, 2010 @ 06:57:19
@snehil ……
hmmm…..may be i knew wat m writing ……i ignored d vague impression it wud giv on a reader…..
thanx!!!
n for ladka ladki k naam…….done!!! phele aap bataoge!!! blog per hi!!!
waiting for ur comment anticipating;ly…tin tin tedin!!
Apr 20, 2010 @ 18:13:49
yahan to nahi, insti mein bata dunga
May 26, 2010 @ 07:58:46
sorry 4 late!!!
aftrall, JAB JAAGO TABHI SAVERA!!!
hmmmm……always machau blog , no doubt.
areee kabhi apna dil apne paas b rakha kar…humesha blogspot pe daaal deti hai!!!!!!!(kiddo)
I got 2 things frm dis blog, firstly u r in smthng smthng(xactly dont know) missing sum1 like hell. secondly, u r sad too.
both contradicts……..will u correct me.
May 28, 2010 @ 09:43:51
cool yaar acha likha hai
pehle se likhti ho ya iit me ane ke bad start kiya hai?
its really nice.
May 29, 2010 @ 15:09:20
labo ki muskurahtein bni hai atit
jane kyo tum jo ruth gaye
ye jindagi hme murda si hoti hai pratit
dekho ab to anshu bhi hmare sukh gaye
chahe mat karo pyar mujhse
par ek sacchi nafarat hi kaar lo
chahae n baanto sab gum mujhse
kyo ho itne gamjada,ye gila to kar dur lo
Jun 15, 2010 @ 08:58:05
@snehil…
: P
glad to know about ur numerous crushes…:
all the best !
@nishant…
there’s nothing grave going in my lyf …don worry… its jus that the poem is a bit serious,…!! m fyn!
@manoj…
thanx..
phele se hi likhti thi,….iit mein aakar blogging shuru ki hai
@vivek…
it really feels great to read my lines in ur words….thanx yaar!!! n u write awesome!!!