Miss You – Excursion#2
24 Jan 2011 3 Comments
Street : A random road behind SDA .
Pre-Script : Click the link below to understand the following ‘feel-o-suffer ‘s ‘ stuff… ![]()
http://surabhi007.wordpress.com/2011/01/21/lyrics-of-life-on-roadside/
Walking on an unknown street – Very less crowded in comparison to the streets of Delhi in a winter afternoon is indeed pleasurable.
The following is an excerpt of what all was going in my 150 pounds complicated gift by GOD . Its neither a poem nor a story : its a prose – A very simple prose written in one go without rereading and editing .
Fine day it was
You woke me up
And took me in your arms from my quilt
Kissed my forehead – in an usual way
I least bothered
N closed my eyes to complete my sleep in your embrace
Hours passed:
Mom dressed me like a queen
Made my hair do beautifully
And gave my hands in yours .
Sure footed about the grip of your hands
My small steps marched with that of yours.
World’s best ride it use to be
You on your bike and
Me wrapping all my hands around your waist
Holding tight
With your trustworthy wings
I let air caresse my face and fly
Reached the sad and tall building
Colourful crowd it was
Many like you and me were there
I was busy watching them
When you bent down
and took my chubby cheeks in your palms
You kissed my forhead – in an unusal way
And took a step back
I gazed
You said softly –
“its time for you stay out of home sweetheart .
See you in a while.”
The thought of getting away from him
Alone in the crowd –the unknown crowd
made my world tremble
I ran and clung on your legs
When you raised your eyebrows and
Looked into my eyes
My voice cracked “Take me Home Dad!”
You hugged me tight
Made my heavy heart a bit light
Bribed me with a chocolate
Promised me that the sepration
Is for a while
It was when my overfilled wet eyes
Were about to flood
When you wiped the tears
Even before they touched my cheeks
“You are my bold little princess, aint you?
“Oh yes! I am” – I chuckled.
“So go and win this first day without mum and me
Away from home for me” You asked with glowing eyes.
“I’ll” I hugged you tight
And bid you good bye with wet eyes adored with smile.
Years later
Here I stand
Far away from mum and you
Among kiths very few
As I close my eyes
I see the your encouraging smile
Your glowing hopeful eyes – there at miles.
My heart still cheers aloud
“Oh yes! I can do it .
I will this battle for you dad.”
Nothing in this chaotic world but just a feeling of being your part makes me feel uniquely proud. Miss you.
Take me Home Dad!
P.S – 1) Song of the day – Fifteen – Taylor Swift.
2) Over dose of emotions is turning me emotionless. Blaaaaaaah!
3) Some situations leaves you to no where but to a state of being helpless. I guess such are the ones which are tagged as the ‘worst’ ones. :|
4) Exams on head so I guess there will be less excursions.



Jan 24, 2011 @ 13:46:20
Not as good as the first one .
Keep walking
Jan 24, 2011 @ 15:11:41
the overflow of emotions takes the reader along….to be proud to be a part of your parents, loved the line..
Jan 31, 2011 @ 18:44:25
Very touching and well-expressed.
Correct the typo – separation has been mis-spelt.