Miss You – Excursion#2

Street : A random road behind SDA .

Pre-Script : Click the link below to understand the following ‘feel-o-suffer ‘s ‘ stuff;)

http://surabhi007.wordpress.com/2011/01/21/lyrics-of-life-on-roadside/

Walking on an unknown street – Very less crowded in comparison to the streets of Delhi in a winter afternoon is indeed pleasurable.

The following is an excerpt of  what all was going in my 150 pounds complicated gift by GOD .  Its neither a poem nor a story : its a prose – A very simple prose written in one go without rereading and editing .


Fine day it was

You woke me up

And took me in your arms from my quilt

Kissed my forehead – in an usual way

I least bothered

N closed my eyes to complete my sleep in your embrace

Hours passed:

Mom dressed  me like a queen

Made my hair do beautifully

And gave my hands in yours .

Sure footed about the grip of your hands

My small steps marched with that of yours.

World’s best ride it use to be

You on your bike and

Me wrapping all my hands around your waist

Holding  tight

With your trustworthy wings

I let air caresse  my face  and fly

Reached the sad and tall building

Colourful crowd it was

Many like you and me were there

I was busy watching them

When you bent down

and took my chubby cheeks in your palms

You kissed my forhead – in an unusal way

And took a step back

I gazed

You said softly –

“its time for you stay out of home sweetheart .

See you in a while.”

The thought of getting away from him

Alone in the crowd –the unknown crowd

made my world tremble

I ran and clung on your legs

When you raised your eyebrows and

Looked into my eyes

My voice cracked “Take me Home Dad!”

You hugged me tight

Made my heavy heart a bit light

Bribed me with a chocolate

Promised me that the sepration

Is for a while

It was when my overfilled wet eyes

Were about to flood

When you wiped the tears

Even before they touched my cheeks

“You are my bold little princess, aint you?

“Oh yes! I am” – I chuckled.

“So go and win this first day without mum and me

Away from home for me” You asked with glowing eyes.

“I’ll” I hugged you tight

And bid you good bye with wet eyes adored with smile.

Years later

Here I stand

Far away from mum and you

Among kiths very few

As I close my eyes

I see the your encouraging smile

Your glowing hopeful eyes – there at miles.

My heart still cheers aloud

“Oh yes! I can do it .

I will this battle for you dad.”

Nothing in this chaotic world but just a feeling of  being your part  makes me feel uniquely proud.  Miss you.

Take me Home Dad!

P.S – 1) Song of the day –  Fifteen – Taylor Swift.

2) Over dose of emotions is turning me emotionless. Blaaaaaaah!

3) Some situations leaves you  to no where but to a state of being helpless. I guess such are the ones which are tagged as the ‘worst’ ones.  :|

4) Exams on head so I guess there will be less excursions. ;)

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3 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Vaibhav Yadav
    Jan 24, 2011 @ 13:46:20

    Not as good as the first one .
    Keep walking :P

    Reply

  2. rohan.kgp
    Jan 24, 2011 @ 15:11:41

    the overflow of emotions takes the reader along….to be proud to be a part of your parents, loved the line..

    Reply

  3. Harsh Snehanshu
    Jan 31, 2011 @ 18:44:25

    Very touching and well-expressed.

    Correct the typo – separation has been mis-spelt.

    Reply

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