And the mistake was mine…

In the glowing life of mine
You were the star with greatest shine
Your voice
Your xpressions for a while
Your talks
Our together walks
Your eyes
And honesty in it that lies
I was crazy about every single bit of it
I was crazy about our evry single meet
I was there with loads of chats
And sumtimes my actions use to make u mad
but without any complain
You showed that you are glad
When I found relations are lost
When I found I miss u the most
When  memories took over my brain
And my heart forgot fun and realised what is pain
It was then I realised
Where does the mistake lies
“You being perfect and the mistake was mine”
I  thought,
You were sharing your world with me,
I thought,
You were caring about the world wrapped around me
I thought,
You want me there next to you and hold
I thought
You love me pampering and not being bold

Actions were yours –  interpretations were mine
It was when sumthing turned from best to fine
I realised what made life so unclear and lose its shine,
Its so obvious
You being perfect and the mistake was mine
Words were yours thoughts were mine
Touch was yours –  feel was mine
Plan was yours path was mine
Smile was yours cheers were mine
Wishes were yours dreams were mine
It was when emptyness filled the core of ma life
I realised what made life so unclear and loose its shine
Its so obvious
You being perfect and the mistake was mine……..
Boundaries were yours freedom was mine
Sketch was yours imagination was mine
Life was yours soul was mine
Relief is yours and pain is mine
It was when drizzling of memories gave me the warmth of cold
I realised what made life so unclear and lose its shine
Its so obvious
You being perfect and the  mistake was mine……….

 

P.S : Dedicated to my teenage love  : [ ;) ], this poem was written long back. :P

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9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Keshav
    Feb 12, 2011 @ 21:47:11

    like I told u before….. super duper likes!!!

    Reply

  2. kanika
    Feb 13, 2011 @ 02:57:51

    LOvely!!!! :)

    Reply

  3. aman
    Feb 13, 2011 @ 04:15:47

    loved it and true :)

    Reply

  4. Abhishek Gupta
    Feb 13, 2011 @ 05:19:24

    nice.. a very common feeling xpressed nicely and beautifully..

    Reply

  5. Harsh Snehanshu
    Feb 13, 2011 @ 12:55:03

    Very good. I like the rhythm of this poem.

    Reply

  6. Sugandha
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 15:05:02

    Ah such a long poem and you managed to keep the flow all along. Well penned. :)

    Reply

  7. Arunima Gupta
    Jun 23, 2011 @ 07:09:22

    This is an EPIC! Very realistic, beautifully blatant!
    Superlike!
    Superlove!

    P.S.: It can make a nice song too! :)

    Reply

  8. smitasidhwani
    Jun 28, 2011 @ 18:11:33

    amazing poem

    Reply

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